Comments on: This Monster in Me #WriteBravely

By: payal agarwal

payal agarwal — Sun, 29 Oct 2017 09:07:26 +0000

It's always about overcoming the darkness with our strengths. An honest piece of poetry.

By: Neha Tambe

Neha Tambe — Thu, 26 Oct 2017 14:27:09 +0000

Great way to depict the inner struggle and how they shape our thoughts.

By: Roshan Radhakrishnan

Roshan Radhakrishnan — Thu, 26 Oct 2017 09:04:54 +0000

None of us are perfect... we all hold some major flaws which are our hidden (and even un-hidden?) monsters in real life. The struggle is to suppress them

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By: Aishwari Mehra

Aishwari Mehra — Thu, 26 Oct 2017 07:03:14 +0000

Many times in life this monster takes over. It is hard to fight with it that leaves me distressed and alone. I try to find peace through meditation where I can find God within me.

By: Meenakshi J

Meenakshi J — Thu, 26 Oct 2017 04:33:06 +0000

Our whole life we keep wrestling with this monster.Sometimes it wins over us , but mostly we triumph over it.Nice poem!

By: Anagha Yatin

Anagha Yatin — Wed, 25 Oct 2017 13:11:04 +0000

The monster within is so difficult to wrestle with. Jayanthy your fluid expression glued me to the end.
Anagha From Team MocktailMommies

By: shalz75

shalz75 — Wed, 25 Oct 2017 06:07:02 +0000

I loved the line that the more I tame her, the more agitated she becomes! This is so true for all of us when facing our inner demons of doubt and unhappiness which feed on our souls through our thoughts only!

By: Shilpa Garg

Shilpa Garg — Tue, 24 Oct 2017 16:06:50 +0000

The inner monsters are tough to tame. But we must face them sooner or later before they take over us!

By: Dipika

Dipika — Tue, 24 Oct 2017 13:35:00 +0000

Very true, monsters are very much inside us. Anger is one I can relate to.
You wrote bravely, loved the poem.

By: Deliciously Alive

Deliciously Alive — Tue, 24 Oct 2017 08:22:05 +0000

Such an honest poem, Jayanthy. We all have monsters inside of us but we rarely acknowledge the fact openly.