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Bated Breath #Writebravely

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She let out a cry,
Looking at the deep blue sky,
Her unanswered prayers,
Were rolling down as tears.
She didn’t like her fate
Laughing at her state,
She bent and kissed,
Her husband’s burnt wrist.
Her 45 year wedded life,
Made her a strong wife,
Not one tear she shed,
All along she was their only thread.
Her son came running to her,
Everything else went blur,
With bated breath he said,
“We were misled!”
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Dipika
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Oh Gosh.. what happened here. I am feeling numb reading these poetic lines. Beautifully written

Corinne Rodrigues
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This is fascinating stuff, Jayanthy. I want to know more about this…

Jayanthy
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Thanks so much Corinne! 🙂

Jayanthy
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Thanks a lot Dipika! 🙂

Shilpa Garg
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This is intriguing! Would love to know more about their story!

Menaka Bharathi
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Lovely, I read twice to know if I missed something, well, I need to know more too

Vasantha Vivek
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Oh … Sad about him and the family. Your words left with many unanswered questions. Wanting to know more …..

ROHAN KACHALIA
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This is nicely penned and brought out the emotions very well.

Neha Tambe
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Beautiful and wants me know more, there is so much unsaid

payal agarwal
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Well penned emotions. Image goes very well with the poem. "The burnt wrist" brings in many thoughts.

AuraOfThoughts MeenalSonal
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Beautiful! Your last line "We were misled", leads to many angels of the story.

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MeenalSonal from AuraOfThoughts

sathish kumar
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poignant… moving…